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Review of Who's there?  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Tulipp*ITEM: Who's there?
*Tulipp*AUTHOR: Stephanie Ferguson~mourning
*Tulipp*TYPE: poetry
*Flowerp*REVIEWED BY *Paw**Pawprints*LISA ANN NOE *Cat2*

*Flowerp*WELCOME: Hello Stephanie Ferguson ,I am here with the power reviewers to read your item Today to give you a detailed review to help you become an excellent writer. "Beauty is in our words"...

*Flowerp*FIRST IMPRESSION: I'm reviewing this because you had been highlighted in the angel army. I thought this item was amusing, the title is very perfect and appropriate for this item. The rhythm was good it smoothly took me through the entire poem, but for the most part it was good. The rhymes were right on. This is a good little poem. a perfect poem for children.

EXCERPT:
His diaper clad behind shimmies across the floor.
We had to put an extra lock on the door.
For at the door someone would knock,
He would stand, tripping over a block.


*Flowerp*SUGGESTIONS: I did not see any mistakes with it, you did a good job.


*Flowerp*CONCLUSION: This has been an endearing and special read for me, thank you for sharing, you keep writing and I'll keep reading. God bless you.
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