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Review of Runaway Star  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Tulipp*ITEM: Runaway Star
*Tulipp*AUTHOR: Minja
*Tulipp*TYPE: poetry
*Flowerp*REVIEWED BY *Paw**Pawprints*LISA ANN NOE *Cat2*

*Flowerp*WELCOME: Hello Minja ,I am here with the power reviewers to read your item Today to give you a detailed review to help you become an excellent writer. "Beauty is in our words"...

*Flowerp*FIRST IMPRESSION: I am reviewing this because you are highlighted with the Angel's Army Anniversary page. I liked this one because it is unique it and has a very good title. I feel the title is an attention getter. This poem was well written and brings to my mind a lovely image of the dark sky at night being illuminated by thousands of tiny stars. It has an easy tone to it and I thought it is very poetic in sound. you have a way of engaging the audience with your words. my favorite part is the following...

EXCERPT:
not because she wants to hide
but because she knows she can't live without darkness

for the darkness she exist
and the darkness she light.
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*Flowerp*SUGGESTIONS: I think you did a good job creating this imaginative and original item.


*Flowerp*CONCLUSION: This has been an endearing and special read for me, thank you for sharing, you keep writing and I'll keep reading. God bless you.
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