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  |  | White Balloons  [ASR] I passed by a cemetery today...  |
| (5.0)  Welcome from the WdC Power Reviewers      And Lisa Noe   ITEM: White BalloonsAUTHOR: Web WitchTYPE: Poetry REVIEWED BY   LISA ANN NOE  WELCOME: Hello Web Witch ,I am here with the power reviewers to read your item Today to give you a detailed review to help you become an excellent writer. "Beauty is in our words"...FIRST IMPRESSION: I am visiting your port today to read some of your stuff. You are Highlighted at the Angel Army 10th year anniversary page. I hope ytou have had a blast during your time with the Angel Army. Your poem was awesome, I thought you did a great job creating this one of a kind poem. I thought it was sad, it flowed well from one sentence to the next asnd I like that you wrote it in the first person, that made it unique. I felt it was very comprehensive as well. The following part I thought summed up the whole poem...EXCERPT: I passed by a cemetery today and saw the white balloons, tribute to a child, taken too soon. SUGGESTIONS: This is a well written poem and I liked it, you did a good job writing it. keep up the good work. CONCLUSION: This has been an endearing and special read for me, thank you for sharing, you keep writing and I'll keep reading. God bless you. 
  Lisa Ann Noe ~~Image #4000 Sharing Restricted~~  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 05/22/2016 @ 7:56pm EDT