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Missing in Action  [E]
When a dear friend vanishes, leaving only questions and sadness behind.
by fyn
Review of Missing in Action  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Tulipp*ITEM: Missing In Action
*Tulipp*AUTHOR: Fyn weeps for Jen
*Tulipp*TYPE: Poetry
*Flowerp*REVIEWED BY *Paw**Pawprints*LISA ANN NOE *Cat2*

*Flowerp*WELCOME: Hello Fyn ,I am here with the power reviewers to read your item Today to give you a detailed review to help you become an excellent writer. "Beauty is in our words"...

*Flowerp*FIRST IMPRESSION: I am reviewing this for your tenth anniversary of the Angel Army. This is a spectacular poem. I thought it was thought provoking, sad, and just down right good. I like the alliteration and assonance that you used, I also like the fact you left a blank line before the last line, it helps to show the disappearance of words.......friend.

EXCERPT:
yet find nothing
except a wisp of words.

Where have you gone, my friend?


*Flowerp*CONCLUSION: This has been an endearing and special read for me, thank you for sharing, you keep writing and I'll keep reading. God bless you.
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