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*Tulipp*ITEM: The Fairy Lady
*Tulipp*AUTHOR: ENB - crazy busy
*Tulipp*TYPE: Poetry
*Flowerp*REVIEWED BY *Paw**Pawprints*LISA ANN NOE *Cat2*

*Flowerp*WELCOME: Hello ENB ,I am here with the power reviewers to read your item Today to give you a detailed review to help you become an excellent writer. "Beauty is in our words"...

*Flowerp*FIRST IMPRESSION: I am here because you are highlighted today for the tenth anniversary of The Angel Army. I have to say that is a wonderful poem, I truly enjoyed it. it was sweet I had to write a song for a fairy to sing in my book, I only wish it was one as good as this one. You did a fabulous job it was engaging, and brought forth vivid images in my mind of flowers and fine jewels, and a sweet little fairy lady. I think it is very imaginative, and original.
the following is my favorite passage...
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My song, little flower,
Will break this cooling spell
Sing along, little flower,
It will do your poor self well.


*Flowerp*SUGGESTIONS: I liked this the best because it broke the spell and I like the last line how you worded it. I did not see any mistakes with your work.

*Flowerp*CONCLUSION: This has been an endearing and special read for me, thank you for sharing, you keep writing and I'll keep reading. God bless you.
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