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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I saw your poem featured in this week's Poetry Newsletter and came to read - congratulations on being selected to be in the newsletter! Also, this was a prompt I gave last week in the Writer's Cramp, although I wasn't the judge of the entries. Thanks for entering there, too!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think the two black bears are the smartest ones of the lot. They ended up with what they came for - a good meal. What's to discourage them from coming back. Well, in my town people are likely to feed them and get too close in order to take pictures. It's quite a panic situation going on.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I thought your rhyme flowed well and your poem was engaging and entertaining.

This was my favorite part:

"Two black bears full as you please,
waddled off home with full tummies."

I like a full tummy my own self! Nice work and congrats again!


HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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