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 Review #4221299 |
 | One Planet of Hope  [E] I wrote this after seeing the Brussels bombing. We need hope right now.  |
| (5.0)  Welcome from the WdC Power Reviewers      And Lisa Noe   ITEM: One Planet of HopeAUTHOR: RedtowriteTYPE: poetry REVIEWED BY   LISA ANN NOE  WELCOME: Hello Redtowrite ,I am here with the power reviewers to read your item Today to give you a detailed review to help you become an excellent writer. "Beauty is in our words"...FIRST IMPRESSION: I am here to give you a special review because you are highlighted with the Angel Army 10 Anniversary.This poem is awesome. I think this is a very powerful poem in that what it says carries with it a big punch. we are a world of people who only have hope to hang on to. without hope our world would crumble I think. your poem points that out. the title is excellent I love it it is very appropriate for this poem. The item description tells us what mind set you had when writing this poem. and what meaning it holds for you. The following excerpt stands out the most to me because of the last line... EXCERPT: In the end, we are nothing. The flesh is gone, the bones decay. The essence of who we are, is in the memories of the lives we touch today. SUGGESTIONS: I did not see any mistakes with this poem you did a good job.CONCLUSION: This has been an endearing and special read for me, thank you for sharing, you keep writing and I'll keep reading. God bless you. 
  Lisa Ann Noe ~~Image #4000 Sharing Restricted~~  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 05/28/2016 @ 4:20pm EDT