Well, it's good to see others rallying around this political bed of fire that has been burning in this country for so many years. Politicians have lost sight of what made this country so great, and have become pulled into the "Can't we all just get along", and What do have to give to you to make this idealistic harmony exist?"

Never will happen. Their social manipulating will not work to strengthen our country, but rather continue to pull it apart. They have been orchestrating a polarization that continues to be destructive to our liberties and abilities to learn and earn, choose what's best for out health, our children and education.

I've seen the country change so very much, since back when I was a child. It's funny, back then, I thought America would always stay the same. Sometimes, I can barely recognize it when I hear these politicians on a roll.

I agree that we all need to wake up.


Your poem is one that cuts to the core, tells it how it is, and warns readers of what to expect if they don't stop allowing big corporations, special interest groups and a whole lot of whiners, from walking all over us as consumers, tax-payers and citizens who just want to stay free, rather than be a part of a peoples that expect to get something for free.

The poem could be a little smoother in places, rhythmically. You could also make the point without the "BS,"inclusion. It takes away a bit from the impact of what you are trying to say, by using a bit of shock-talk. Don't want that to be the most memorable line of the poem, with an important argument trying to be made.

You responded to this review 05/30/2016 @ 10:14pm EDT

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