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 Today is a Good Day  [13+]
My ex has gone to jail. Hip hip hurrah
by Arglebarge
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 

Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Plug*
This is a Simply Positive Review!

*Laugh* I needed to read something like this, at this exact moment.

*Seahorse* I so enjoyed your humorous poem which painted vivid picture about an "Ex," and the jubilation felt by his ex-wife is obvious throughout the poem.

*Turtle2* Your poem keeps up a good pace, most of the way through, with just a wordier third stanza, that slows the reader down a bit. That one made me go back and read it twice to see if it was just my reading. Well, maybe it is me, but I it's still wordier than the other lines.

*Infinity* Nevertheless, the poem as whole, does entertain and amuse. You put a smile on my face after a long, couple days of "things needed to get done."

Thank you for sharing this amusing and quirky piece. Well done! *Fairy2*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch


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