*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4222135
Review #4222135
Viewing a review of:
 The Bishop's Speech  [E]
The Bishop says farewell to the king too battle.
by Lugk Agumbuk
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
my review sig

"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" 

Hello there, Newbie!Welcome to WDC. *SuitClub*
This is a Simply Positive Review!

*Shield2* I loved the images that I conjured up in my mind, as I read through these poetic lines, noting the fact that the Bishop was giving his farewell speech, to his king, whom he knew would not return from battle, alive.

*Horseshoe* I liked the tone, and meter of the speech. It keeps the reader moving along from line to line. It places a face upon this character, so the reader can identify with him, his gestures ans pattern of speaking publicly.


Observation:

"come hither for else the seasons ['s] plants will wither"

*Target2* Nicely orchestrated speech, befitting the life and times of a kingdom, knights ready to do battle, and a king who is more than happy to fight to retain his crown.

Nobly done! *Crown*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch



*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 06/01/2016 @ 1:11pm EDT
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4222135