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 | Winsome Wants  [E] To go beyond the circle....  |
| (4.5)   Hiya Fyn! Thanks for being a WDC  In the Anniversary Auction!   What a intriguing title with its flowing alliteration! I was happy to see more alliteration inside the poem!  It was a delight to read and wow you really can create a flowy tongue twister.  So many w words mixed in with the "wr" sound words like "waxing..wrings' and "waiting...wraiths" slow me down and give me a challenging workout!  Inspires me to want to try one and I think it must take time to get it to make sense. Do you gather your words first and then weave them? The imagery is vivid and I was lured in from the first line wondering. So like a run on sentence...er a poem that wanders so that we don't stop in the dark. It was fun. I had to wonder at first what the wolf wraiths were waiting for or does the music "wring" them "forth". Or is the speaker "waiting wolf.." I got a little confused. I see the imagination running wild from inside a window on a cold night. At the beginning the speaker is wandering... or in the mind they are. I will have to dwell more on the dream like vision. and not take it so literally. I liked reading it aloud and in a muse fashion without thought. It feels like a metaphor for fear of going beyond the comfort zone. I know that one. Wonderful weaving and evokes inspiration and the dream.  Thanks for sharing your gift. eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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