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 The Worst Godbye  [E]
I went to a small school, graduating was hard
by Miss Wopplebop
Review of The Worst Godbye  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I watched The Prince and Me last night and their graduation scene wasn't tearful. Yours pulled me in and made me sad.

You made me want to know more. Where were they heading? What were the hopes?

I liked the 'laugh at how they've cried'. It lightened the mood and that is what made me think of the movie scene. Nicely done.

I love your last two lines.

I really enjoyed your poem. Thanks so much for sharing.
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