I was really into the poem until verse five, then the really long first line threw me out. I hope you can ponder on reworking that verse.

I liked how you made all the 'shoulds' different and yet meaningful.

You transitioned well from what you had wanted from your father into what you were determined to be as a father to your children.

I can totally relate. That is how it was with my mom.

Your last two lines were a bit abrupt in ending. It just didn't fit the rest of the poem. I liked your commitment to being a good father and role model.
Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
love, LinnAnn