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Greetings Moody Blue: Needs an Upgrade ! A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port? I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering! What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item? This is a story about a birthday where the parent tries to do everything they can think of to make the child happy. Unfortunately events take a turn and tragedy replaces what was supposed to be a happy fifth birthday! What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item? I think you did a nice job of incorporating the prompts. At the end I felt as if the first person narrator (the mother) is telling the story while still in shock. There is a sense that the speaker cannot quite get their head around what has happened in so short a time. Very moving and sad, while being creative and original. Nice work! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I travel to many galaxies and pick my reading carefully, just as I pick my hay carefully. END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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