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Stories for 100 Days of Writing  [E]
Short Stories
by Angel
         Review for entry/chapter: "Jade" 
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings Angel !



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*This is a story that is heartwarming and poignant about what may be a child's last birthday and the connection that child feels to swans in particular. The time frame of the story isn't defined - I sort of assume that it is in the past before they developed the life saving stuff they have today to treat it.

I noticed that you did not highlight the word, "swan" but you did use it in your story as required.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* It is a heartbreaking tale that tells of bringing happiness to a child who will not see many days unless there is a profound medical breakthrough. While mother Beatrice is losing her, she is also cherishing her while they are together.

I thought this was remarkable and bittersweet. You did a nice job with the prompt words.

Well done!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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