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 A Swan  [13+]
Writer's Cramp Prompt 6/14, details at bottom of entry, word count: 625
by NeedingBeachDuf 🐠⛵🏝️
Review of A Swan  
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think the relationship dynamics between mothers, daughters and grandaughters are on display in this well written short story. I could feel the mother's frustration with her own mother wanting to be the star of the show.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup*I think you did a fine job of incorporating the prompt words and creating an original story with interesting characters.

Nice work!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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