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| (4.5)   Greetings Steev the Friction Wizurd  !What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?  I am the judge today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?   I think the saying "Be careful what you wish for" applies readily to this scenario. At first it seemed whimsical and then it took a dark turn. I liked it and the humor too, although there was some sadness too.I saw one minor typo to mention and that is this: "I suggest we keep quite about this." The word "quite" should be changed to "quiet" in this context.  What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?  The part that cracked me up and that I immediately felt guilty about what that fallen and can't get up part. You did a fine job of writing and original story from the prompt words! I like that your swans have a menacing quality, also.Nice work! HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps  PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. I travel to many galaxies and pick my reading carefully, just as I pick my hay carefully.  END OF PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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