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Queen Bee’s 10th Twenty-Ninth Birthday  [13+]
Cramp Winner: It's the queen's birthday. "Where is my cake?"
by Than Pence
Review by ♥Hooves♥
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings Than Pence !



What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*Queen Beatrice does not sound like someone to be trifled with or messed with. She wants what she wants and knows how to get it. Fudging on her age that much takes a lot of moxie and nerve.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* You incorporated the prompts very well into your clever and original story. I liked that the queen had an edge to her. Some people have to have everything their own way. The remarks about her father's demise were chillingly humorous. It seems like the key to longevity in her kingdom is to either agree with everything she says or get out of her way.

There are individuals I have seen who have a lot in common with Queen Beatrice.

Nice work!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 


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