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Review #4226842
Viewing a review of:
Abba Music Journal, Stories and Poems  [ASR]
My journal of Abba's music, short stories and poems for a contest.
by Princess Megan Rose 22 Years
         Review for entry/chapter: "Dancing Queen
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I decided to come and snoop around and here I found your Abba entry journal, which I will enjoy reading!

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* You did a nice job with your short story. I feel like I know the characters and the setting fit the song perfectly!

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* In the end, I liked Kendall, but I had worries about Avery. Is his reaction to every stress going to be walking out. I think any girl in Kendall's shoes better prepare for going it on her own.

This sounded just like a guy who runs away from responsibilities, which a lot of young guys tend to do. Very revealing story and I like that he showed up, but not that he made her wait. So, you make me interested to see what happens next to the characters and if he straightens out and flies right.

Great story, Megan!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 06/19/2016 @ 10:32am EDT
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