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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You visited me recently with a nice review, so here I am visiting you.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I like that she (the narrator) has her revenge, but I wanted him to go someplace else in the end, such as some place where he would suffer for what her did to her. I think that in the end people who hurt other people go somewhere different from their victims, but that's just me. Maybe he was stopping by on his way to punishment.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I like her cool, calm get even attitude. I figure there's nothing she can do to change things so why not be calm about it and get some satisfaction out of making him suffer.

The tone of voice is good and your story presents a lot of options in terms of possibly continuing it and maybe writing a longer work about what caused him to do what he did and why he picked her.

I enjoyed reading it - Thanks again for visiting me!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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