*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4227063
Review #4227063
Viewing a review of:
 it's coming....  [E]
free format poem on autumn
by ElaineElaine
Review of it's coming....  
Review by ~ IVELTAC ~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Winter is coming Winter is coming. So true. It seems like the years go by super fast. Bringing season after season like a tv show. Its hard to just sit back and grasp the seasons. You did a good job at it though. My favorite line would have to be
"Tasty pumpkin pies."

Hey also just an idea. You might want to capitalize Autumn abd Winter and maybe the first letters in each line. It might present it better.
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*

** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 06/21/2016 @ 9:10am EDT
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4227063