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Review #4227570
Viewing a review of:
Abba Music Journal, Stories and Poems  [ASR]
My journal of Abba's music, short stories and poems for a contest.
by Princess Megan Rose 22 Years
         Review for entry/chapter: "Me and Bobby and Bobby's Brother" 
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* This is another song in your ABBA Journal that you have taken and made into a story.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea*This story is about people wanting things that don't fit in with other people's plans.

Bobby and Ryan don't sound like prizes, but it's all in the eye of the beholder. Sometimes, I think it's better to be alone than with someone who doesn't care.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I like that Lacy seems headed toward moving along and maybe forgetting about Bobby's whole family. They don't sound so nice to me and Bobby could have just told her his feelings went elsewhere, without saying who.

I don't think, in the end, that Diane is getting much of a prize there.

Great storytelling inspired by a song that I am not familiar with, but based on what I see I think you did a fine job!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 
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