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Given: Jun 26, 2016 at 7:42pm
Length: 962 Characters |
833 w/o WritingML
Welcome to WDC! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!
Your item popped up on the random reads and I like the declarative strong title.
The expression is strong and shows your faith. The image qualities of the dark are vivid. The reflective tone is vibrant and reveals the struggle that many go through. The repetition of the title words are well used and emphatic.
The style makes for a dramatic read with a variety of sentence lengths and types. The queries may draw responses from an audience as well. You have some lovely sound combinations that make the read flow and add vibrant tone. eg. "sly smart weasel" , "weaknesses,..waiting to pounce". etc. I appreciated the language.
Thanks for sharing your vision and craft. Have fun at WDC.
Light on the path as you write on!
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