Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

There are chickens in my neighborhood and I live in the city. But so far, I've been spared the crowing of a rooster.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

Anyone who has a problem with roosters. The dialog in this piece was extremely well written. It really formed the character. He was witty and intelligent.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

The ending of the story illustrated the purpose clearly enough. What the character wanted to do and thought he wanted to do were very different actions. It was a nice to surprise to see his humanity kick in at the end.


Glows:

I would never have thought of a story like this and it may have bored me if not written in your style. It was slightly sarcastic but not off putting. I thought the character was going to be somewhat of a malcontent but he redeemed himself at the end. It was a fun story that illustrated you never what you're going to do until you're confronted with a decision you may not have expected.



Grows:

None.



Miscellaneous Comments:

I wonder if you have personal experiences living next to roosters. You write about their frustrations so clearly. Good job.


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