Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I was engaged from the beginning to the end and the end was my favorite part! I love the fangs of fear brought forth a beast! How sharp they must be!


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

Adults and children would both appreciate the ideas of this piece and it would be a great piece of Halloween fun! You could put illustrations this one and make it a children's book. Creatures That Go Bump in the Night or something like that.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

It's great tale of a scary creature that doesn't scare the lady relaxing in the chair. She's no fool! It's a good folktale about an unnamed creature with sharp fangs and has trouble scaring its intended victim.


Glows:

I love the way it stalks the lady sitting in the chair only to find out she's not scared by it. A fiend of fate only to be called a lunatic, how unscary and clever.



Grows:

Does this fiend have a name? Or a more of a descprition? I would love to know more about him and the terror he inspires. He's got to be a legend so I wonder what his history is. That would be an interesting piece of information to work into the poem.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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