Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

It sounds like he's coming back from war and missed his love only to find her in pleasure with someone else. It's a woeful tale of longing and forgiveness.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

It's a very romantic poem in the sens that its about lovers. It's intended for adult audiences who can appreciate tantalizing romance. It's an example of great story telling in poetry. It's not about how the author is feeling personally, and I love that feature in poetry. It's a little unusual to see these pieces, and I appreciate them when I do.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

To tell a great story of romance, deceit and forgiveness. I love the range of the poem, it spans this character's life. You see the full picture of it from beginning to end.


Glows:

I like the rhythm of it. It flowed well and was easy to understand. My favorite part is the redemption at the end.



Grows:

I thought maybe he was a prisoner then I wasn't sure. I'd like a verse about it if he was and if he wasn't why was he on a rampart? Is he a prince or some other figure of nobility?



Miscellaneous Comments:

It's a vivid and sensual piece. Thank yo for sharing it.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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