Hi Magoo ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is such a sweet poem, dear author. I guess that love comes in many different forms!

I love the imagery you use in this poem. The flirting lady groundhog, the little cupid, the wispy clouds, the shadow upon the snow. All paint a really sweet picture and it makes for a poem that is perfect for children. Adults, too, as I am an adult and loved this poem.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. I love your use of punctuation, and that you allowed the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend on the individual sentences within the piece, because that really helps the overall clarity of the poem, and assists the reader in finding the poem's rhythm and flow.

I liked the rhythm and flow. It was easy to find. You also did a great job with the rhyming. All in all, it's a good read, well done!

Suggestions:

I don't have any suggestions, dear author. Not helpful, I know, but I couldn't find any errors, nor anything that I thought could be improved upon.

My Rating:

As you can no doubt tell, I enjoyed this poem. I was happy to read it.

I had no suggestions, so I will give this item the 5 out of 5 rating it deserves.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit





My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .