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Hello!Igor

I just read your article. From your writing I learn much about Russia. I have heard before that Russian women’s are beautiful which you also said.

*FishB* My favorite points:
“Russians wear serious expressions on their faces and seem to be serious when you meet them for the first time.”
“Russian women practice ritual of an almost professional modeling session taking pictures. She lays on the floor, spreads her skirt, models, accommodates. It takes a lot of time.”

*AsteriskO* Suggestion: I think you can use writing-ML to make it more interesting.
Overall expression: Thank you for sharing your helpful piece with us. It’s well written.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!*Smile*

Mina  


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