Hi Phil G ,I found your writing ad random. Hopefully this review will find you in good spirit.


On Title/Subject
Please Like me is a very good title, and with the subline it's a guaranteed hit because it sets the tone right away. Fun, fun, fun! I am full of anticipation of this piece. What will it bring?


General impressions
I loved this piece on Facebook. It's well written and easy to read. It's full of anecdotes and examples of use and misuse of this social medium. I had to chuckle a few times and was laughing out loud too, so I enjoyed myself reading this.

Favorite Parts
Another thing, will someone please explain mirror selfies to me. If a person has fourteen thousand friends, doesn't it stand to reason they could find someone willing to take their picture? And please, please, please, keep your tongues in your mouth.


Downright hilarious! If you are looking rationally towards Facebook nothing holds. You put the finger on the sore spot.

The end is also very good: I died three weeks ago. Would someone please let my wife know. She thinks I'm napping.

Suggestions
Nothing to add, spelling and grammar okay, setting and fun covered. Good read, well written.


Final thoughts

All in all an excellent read, thanks for sharing.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive