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Hello, gardengirl! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


*Castlegr* Why I chose to review this work: I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when this caught my eye. The short description of your poem appealed to me more than the title and I found myself drawn to it, wanting to know about why the poem was titled the way it is right now. It made the reader feel dark and sad especially when I read about the soul bleeding. A soul or a person bleeds only when it is heavy with sorrow, with pain and depression and I wanted to know if this is what you had written here too.

*Castleright* First Impression: That was certainly something very dark and deep and it made the reader feel sympathetic for the person as well as at the same time, it gave a glimpse to the reader what his world, what his prison and pain looks like. Your poem was quite powerful and it left me wondering why it hadn't received any reviews or ratings before. Quite a good poem you have here!

*Castlegr* Imagery and Vocabulary: The flow of your poem was excellent, it was smooth as I read it out louod and there was not a single interruption. The use of rhyming scheme enhanced the rhythm and the flow of your poem, making it more captivating, getting the reader even more absorbed in it. The choice of vocabulary used in your poem was quite strong especially in the first two stanza where you grabbed my complete attention and I couldn't turn away, not until I had finished reading it.

*Castleright* Favourite Lines: The first two stanza were the ones I loved the most from your poem but if I were to choose one, it would be the second one. I fell in love with this line, I really liked it! The way you had worded it was very interesting. between the cracks of hopeful dreams

*Castle* Final Thoughts: A very dark, nice poem that followed the requirements. The last stanza made me wonder how we all look back to what we were and no longer are. Some people see it with regret while others see it with pride.

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