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Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello, Jacob Risenhoover ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


*Castlegr* Why I chose to review this work: The title of your poem caught my attention as I wanted to know if it was meant as a promise to do something or as something in the literal way like actually burn something. Then there was the short description that had the reader even more curious to know why a person would have the urge to destory everything and how far is he willing to go. To get my answers, I am here to read and review your poem.

*Castleright* First Impression: Wow, the reader sees a very serious side of the poet in this poem and it made the reader feel terrified and kind of threatened as well, wondering what made the poet become so destructive. It made me think of movies like Saw etc where there are a lot of bloody scenes and gore-y stuff. I think that it can be extended with more of the emotions put into words.

*Castlegr* Imagery and Vocabulary: The flow of your short poem was okay, the vocabulary you had chosen in your poem was strange but strange in a good way. It was unusual but went quite good, along the poem.

*Castleright* Favourite Lines: The words that really had a deep impact on me is

Set fire to the horizon
Burn my words in the sky

*Castle* Final Thoughts: As I said above, it has potential and I'd like to see it extended.

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