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the same moon  [E]
pondering the role of the moon in our memory
by christo
Review of the same moon  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, christo ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


*Castlegr* Why I chose to review this work: I was searching for something to review from your portfolio for the WDC Game of Thrones Battle when I saw this particular poem. I chose to read and review it because the title caught my attention. In the nature objects, I like reading poems about moon and sun but I am always more drawn towards moon due to the slight sad and romantic touch it has. The title and the short description made the reader curious and it made her want to know what the poem was about and what role did the moon play in the memories.

*Castleright* First Impression: Wow, you have quite a deep poem here. I read the poem twice to grab the idea completely but it was good and worth it, I'd say. You have a confused reader come to a conclusion and find an answer as to why you titled the poem the way it is. The first stanza opens just like a nature poem where it is a normal and usual moon, night sighting where the poet appreciates its beauty but it is in the second and the last stanza that the reader actually understands and grasps the idea behind your short description.

*Castlegr* Imagery and Vocabulary: The vocabulary you had chosen for your poem was good, it was simple but effective in conveying the message, the answer to her doubts, to the reader as she read your poem and imagined the lovely scenery of the moon in the dark blue sky, sitting somewhere near river, seeing its perfect reflection and wondering about the times she spent with her loved one under the same moon.

*Castleright* Favourite Lines: I loved the second stanza the most. The reason is because you explain the reader in an indirect method, giving her a key to the title. I really liked this factor of your poem. You reminisce and remember the moon as time spent with someone, only then do you remember it was the same moon when we went to our first date or when I went to meet her outside of the curfew time under the same moon. Beautiful!

*Castle* Final Thoughts: A tricky but when the reader gets it, a wonderful poem!

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