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Acrostic Poems  [E]
Some of my acrostic poems
by Natechia dos Reis
Review of Acrostic Poems  
Review by Shaye
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Natechia dos Reis ,

I am Lorraine and I am reviewing your piece "Acrostic Poems"  today in affiliation with "Simply Positive Review Forum " .

Title: A folder holding acrostic poems, I think the title is suitable! The only thing I'd suggest is to capitalise the P of poems, so it reads "Acrostic Poems".

First Impression: A folder full of interesting poems, all acrostic as far as I can see. There are quite a few, so it definitely seems worth it creating a whole dedicated folder.

Genres: I noticed for quite a few of your poems, and even this folder, you have "other" listed as the first genre. The first genre listed is generally considered the most important, the one people look for if they're looking to read something in a particular genre. I'd suggest taking a look and changing some of your items so the first genre isn't "other", and then if you can't think of all three genres, just put the third one as "None". That means all of your pieces won't display "other". Just a suggestion of course, you may have a good reason for using "other".

Images: Most of your poems have cover images, which gives the reader a hint as to what the item may be about. It also adds to the effect of the poem itself if there's an emotional image attached to it.

Spelling/Grammar: No errors spotted here!

Closing Thoughts: It's always nice for a folder to get a few stars. Folders are so often forgotten, but they're the first thing many people see when they take a look at your portfolio!

Lorraine


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