Title of Work: : Trespassing on Paradise Island Part Two (fanfiction)
Author of Work: : KingSideCastle
Date: : July 17

Plot:
Superman finds himself at the mercy of Wonder Woman's feet.

Scene/Setting:
Superman is taken to Wonder Woman's chambers and held there on his knees for her to come. It is explained he cannot break out of the chains because they were forged by Hephaestus. After a few minutes Wonder Woman comes in and talks to Clark. Clark thinks she is going to let him go, but she cannot because her island and the people on it could be destroyed by a greater power. Dianna cannot take that chance. She tells Superman he is about to be reduced to an Amazon slave who will take orders from any woman. He doesn't believe it. Diana makes a deal with him. If he can make it out the door, then she will not punish him and take her chances with everything else which could happen. She knows she can win.

Clark starts toward the door. As he reaches it, Diana removes her boots and wiggles her toes. Apparently Clark Kent has a foot fetish and cannot take his eyes off of Diana's feet. Eventually his knees buckle and he is lost to the punishment.

Characters:
Clark Kent - Superman
Diana - Wonder Woman

Suggestions:
Correct spelling = Trespassing (You have an extra "s" in the title word). Nice continuation of the story. As I said before, I think it is really great to see someone take established characters and place them in situations, we would never see them in under "normal" circumstances. Cannot wait for Chapter three. Please let me know when you post.

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