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Review of Love Hurts  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, OOT™ ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


*Castlegr* Why I chose to review this work: I couldn't stay away from your portfolio and here I am again. You have a lot of variety of stories and poetry in your portfolio and they are really good too! You are among my favourite WDC authors of all time now! I really enjoy reading your work and I chose this one because you said that this was your first attempt at Fibonacci so I wanted to know how you did it and secondly, the title of your poem was very emotional and sad and I wanted to read what you had here about love hurts.

*Castleright* First Impression: There are two aspects of love or you can say endings, a happy ending (happy aspects) and a sad ending (negative aspect filled with pain). While the happy side has its own charm, I am more attracted towards the negative aspect because of the raw emotions packed in it. Therefore, I enjoyed your poem as you explored the dark, painful side of love and you did it quite well in just a few lines and few words. The tragic side of love you have here made the reader feel pain and look beyond what you just had written.

*Castlegr* Imagery and Vocabulary: The vocabulary used in your poem was very strong and effective in conveying emotions to the reader. I liked the fact that this could be taken as a general poem as well as the reader can feel a story behind the words, a personal experience that makes the poem all the more meaningful and touching. It was like the reader was watching a sad movie where they were strangers, then friends, lovers and then strangers again. The flow of your poem was good, there was no interruption and it flew out smoothly when I read it out loud.

*Castleright* Favourite Lines: In the end, what was once considered love becomes seemingly never ending heartache * I really liked this line from your poem which sums up the breakup or ending of a relationship perfectly.

*Castle* Final Thoughts: A touching poem that happens to almost all of us before we find someone else, someone better for us.

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