Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-13-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Gripping. There is raw emotion here. From one who endured a lifetime of neglect and no love. This poem grips the reader and doesn't let go until the very end.
Congrats on your honorable mention in a contest. I might have pushed for a higher finish.
Form and structure are standard fare.
Rhyming is impeccable and lends a melodious timber to the smooth flow going on here.
The pace is slow as the reader sympathizes with the character you do create with your stanzas of life.
Grammatically there was not even a jot nor tittle out of place. Wow!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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