Found your item in the Poetry Newsletter 07-13-16
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Speechless.
You create a world around mamma bird and her babies.
The reader can see the growth, feel the care and concern. That's imagery that sings!
Form and structure are apropos.
Rhyming scheme is stellar!
There is a song that can be sung within these lines.
Flow is as smooth as a well worn path.
Pace is slow and sensory soaked.
The reader is thrilled!
Grammatically speaking, your item is flawless.
Suggestions for improvement: Speechless.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
Remembering SHERRI GIBSON
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