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Legends of the Mind  [E]
Alzheimer's can't destroy everything [Janaku]
by Winnie Kay
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Winnie Kay ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


*Castlegr* Why I chose to review this work: After my last visit to your portfolio, I wanted to read more of your work and here I am again. When I was searching for something to review in your poetry folder, this caught my eye especially because of the affectionate and nice short description that made the reader feel an invisible strong bond and wanting to read the poem. I read in your portfolio that your mother passed away (may her soul rest in peace) and that she suffered from Alzheimer's. I have knowledge about Alzheimer's and how it affects the person close to the patient in a sad way but I had never read the positive side of it, like you have demonstrated, full of love and hope instead of depression and pain. That is what I gathered from the short description and the title and therefore I naturally wanted to see what was inside the poem.

*Castleright* First Impression: This is the first time I have read a Janaku poetry and it was well written. I liked the positive side of Alzheimer's that the patients are still your close and loved ones and nothing can change that. No one can completely erase the relationship between a mother and a daughter, a son and a father, sisters, brothers etc and no matter what the circumstances are or will be, they are and will always be our family. It really touched me *Heart*.

*Castlegr* Imagery and Vocabulary: The flow of your poem was good, there was no interruption and it flew out smoothly. The vocabulary you had chosen for your poem was perfect, it was simple but very effective in conveying the emotions to the reader and bringing a few tears to her in the end of the poem. Wonderful! I could imagine myself looking towards someone I care about suffering from Alzheimer's and yet my feelings cannot be changed about how I feel about him/her and she/he will always be the one who he/she has been in my life.

*Castleright* Favourite Lines: The last stanza was my favourite because that is what family is, despite all the hardships, all the trouble, their relationship with us, the affection and the love will never change. Beautiful!

*Castle* Final Thoughts: Loved your short poem that is packed with so many emotions! *Heart*

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