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| A review for the House of Greyjoy ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Review of Darin First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest. OVERALL IMPRESSIONS: The story begins as a romantic tryst with two couples who have rented a cabin in the woods and are enjoying their time together as they get ready to share a steak barbque. While waiting for the potatoes to roast two of the characters Darin and Lacy slide away for a private moment and something terrible happens.This erotic love story turns into a horror/slasher story. PLOT & CHARACTERS: Craig is with Gail and Darin is with Lacey. Lacey and Darin slide away for some romance and suddenly Lacey is lying on the trail with a knife in her back. the story goes from there with Craig and Gail also dying Darin tries to drive away but a police car stops him. There is a twist at this point that I found difficult to follow. SUGGESTIONS/EDITS: Give us a little hint of what is to come. FINAL THOUGHTS: Great story. dblameck  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 07/18/2016 @ 9:02am EDT