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 | Nathan the Ninja Warrior  [13+] Nathan discovers his powers and saves his village from a sea monster.  |
| (4.0)  A "Game of Thrones"  Martell Review A Review from "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" Hello, Winnie Kay ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item. Why I chose to review this work: When I was searching for something to review from your portfolio in the stories folder, this one caught my attention. The main reason was because I enjoy reading children's stories and writing them and this seemed like a perfect story for me to read in the genre. The title and the short description promised thrill, suspense and action to the reader along with nice feelings. First Impression: Honestly, it's been a while since I read something like this, a short children's story about saving the world or his home and although it was simple, it was very cute and interesting! It reminded me of how I used to write children stories like these in the past and now I have shifted to other genres. Setting/Plot: The setting in your story is good, a small fishing village, usually that is how the hero stories begin especially of kids where they save their home so it was ideal. The plot of your story was also good, simple, common but interesting and unique in its own way.  Characters: The characters you have in your story were very interesting especially the aunt Winnie and Nathan. It was nice to get to know such a brave young boy who is determined to help his village as well as loves to spend time with his parents and is a kind brother to his siblings. Favourite Part: The part where you mentioned how he loved his mother and would die for her and yet his bond with his father was special - I really loved it! Very touching! Final Thoughts: A nice, short sweet story about a boy ninja saving his village. I found no typos or errors of any sort   Thank you for sharing your work with us!  Write On! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 07/17/2016 @ 12:58pm EDT