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Hello, willy , and good afternoon!

Once again, it is time for battle for House Tyrell, and your name popped up as one of the warriors we must defeat (through reviews *Wink*). This poem follows the criteria for the poetic form and presents a clear image, which is why I am rating this with a solid four stars. Here's my policies for rating and reviewing for your reference: "Bobbi's Rating and/or Reviewing Policy" . If you have any questions or concerns about your rate and review, please feel free to email me.


A few things I noticed as a reader:

The one thing I love about these review challenges is that I have a chance to read and review forms that I usually wouldn't. Before Game of Thrones, I would avoid reviewing poetry because I knew so little of it. In a short time span, I have learned so much about new poetry forms (besides the haiku and limerick) and have even attempted a couple of poems myself. *Smile*

This particular form is short and sweet; if I'm not mistaken, many of these kind of poems are nature inspired as well (though it is certainly not restricted to such). Since this is a public review, I will also add a link about the poem structure for the uninitiated: Lanterne poetic structure  .

As I said, this short poem followed the rules and presented a clear image of a shoreline tides on a moonlit night. Ebb and flow, ebb and flow, the shoreline, as is the world, is always in flux.

Thank you for allowing me to review your piece. I'm just another reader and writer so use or discard any of my suggestions at your personal discretion. If you make changes and would like me to reassess your piece, feel free to e-mail me. *Mail*

Keep writing and carry on! *ThumbsUpL*

—Brandi of House Tyrell *Shield5*
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