Hello, I like this story, although I did not find it ha ha funny.
This story has a good story line in it. It kept me hooked through to the end. The message I got is to follow your dreams even if you don't know what they are or who you are.
The characters were likable and realistic. I was hoping that Chad would win the contest but I guess he went on to bigger and better things. I read that he combusted on the dance floor but what happened to him? Did he die or just move on to a better life?
I was pulled in by the fact that I thought I would laugh at the situation in the story but it was light hearted. I felt sorry for Chad because he didn't know who he was nor where he came from and he didn't seem to want to find out, why? I did find the ending beautiful when he combusted because everyone else enjoyed watching him give of himself without remorse.
The setting was good. I saw the places that they went. I like the description of the colors during the dance contest. The ending was good. I like the fact that Chad had a larger purpose in life than what he was doing.
This was a great story. Thank you for writing and hope you keep up the good work.