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| (5.0)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Just tired  PLOT - Amy stays by her husband's bedside, living at the hospital while cancer ravages his body and he grows weak. No one can get her to leave his side. She thinks this is it, that he will be leaving her soon. Just when the room is empty accept for the two of them, Ron starts to speak, making one last request that Amy cannot deny, for she wants this moment as much as he does. SETTING - Great descriptions of Ron how he was in their younger years, and how he is now. The hospital room with the beeping machines was easy to picture as well. I loved how she saw him as more beautiful than any magazine model. CHARACTERS - Ron is ready to let go, but wants Amy with him, to share this one last moment with the love of his life. Amy cannot deny his request, even knowing that once the machines are turned off he most likely won't make it through the night. GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE - I can't stand the thoughts of losing more time with you. The dialog was very real, so touching and bittersweet. THOUGHTS - What a moving story of a couple who choose one another even in death, not wanting to be parted and lose anymore time. Your story and characters were very real and moving. So glad I read this one. Thanks for sharing something so heartfelt and emotional. You had me in tears at the end. Beautiful. Write on!   
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You responded to this review 07/19/2016 @ 6:19pm EDT