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Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, Sara♥Jean ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.


When I was searching for something to review in your Poetry folder, I saw the children poems and couldn't stay away from it. I really enjoy writing and reading Children stories and poems and this particular poem caught my attention. The title of the poem was really interesting and funny as the reader found it entertaining and at the same time, she became curious to know what the kid may be referring to.

I really like kids, and I guess it is due to the fact that they are like this, so innocent and they say so funny, thought provoking things that get us adults and older people into thinking. The beginning of your poem caught the reader's attention as her eyes remain glued to the screen, wondering what might be loose inside of me. A kid can't say there's a screw loose in him, now can he so it was a wonder what was loose and the reader was surprised and amazed to read it was a tooth! *Laugh* You had me really confused and serious when I reached the point where you wrote that it could be lost anywhere in the body.

My favourite lines were: So if you know how to get rid of this tooth,
I'll pay you a quarter, and that's the truth!

Other than this, I loved how you introduced the concept of Tooth fairy here and used it! *Laugh* Your short description was perfect, it really was a very nice, cute poem!

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