Hi Donkey Hoetay ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is brilliant! How did you even come up with this idea? I love it! A poem about the letter Q's dislike of U.

It's not only an inspired piece, you do an amazing job with the idea. The use of words where Q and U are indeed joined together, whether they like it or not. The idea of an escape to Qatar. Excellent imagery, excellent display of creativity.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. It has a nice rhythm and flow. It's neatly presented and easy on the eye. Nice rhyming scheme as well. Great work!

Suggestions:

My only suggestions are about punctuation and capitalisation. You use some punctuation in this poem, which is very helpful for the reader as it aids the overall clarity. In some places, however - at the end of some sentences, for example - it's left out. I suggest adding it there to perfect the overall consistency.

I would also, then, allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the piece. This would perfect the overall clarity and reading experience.

My Rating:

An excellent, fun poem. I am glad that I found it.

I did have a couple of suggestions, but those are more of a matter of personal preference. I will still give this poem the 5 out of 5 rating it deserves.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit








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