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My Psalm  [E]
Someone once suggested: Write a psalm of your own.
by ruwth
Review of My Psalm  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

Psalms and Ecclesiastes are my favorite books in the bible. He is everything we need and more than we deserve because he the ultimate sort of selfless love. Even non-Christians could support that idea I'm sure.

Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I recommend this piece to other Christians looking for a creative way to express their love for Jesus. I would hope non-believers could get postive sentiments from participating in an exercise of writing their own psalm. It's a great tool for reflection.

Was there a clear purpose to it?

Jesus is there for us in our darkest hours. It's funny, we forget his humanity in his divinity. He was scared and expressed fear in the Garden before the Romans took him away to his death. He didn't want to go. But, he did. Those are the examples I think about. We are weak and made to suffer. We don't know why exactly but you either accept that there is a greater purpose behind it or you don't.


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It's a beautiful exercise. I love the line in the darkest of my nights, you were the brightest light. It's beautiful to think of the North star or a beacon light in a lighthouse. It is dark here and that is exactly why I need the light.



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