Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

It is very opinionated and I agree wholeheartedly with the sentiments you expressed here. We do spend with credit we don't have and the dream was sold out along time ago. It really is going to be about uplifting whole communities together to get through the times ahead, my humble thoughts that may find their place among these words.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

My own personal bias is that I would definitely share this writing because I think you bring some extremely valid and authentic views here.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

It definitely expresses how you feel and your thoughts about society today. In reality, the well is dry. It sure is. The golden altars built unto God were only altars built unto ourselves. That has to be my favorite line.


Glows:

I've done enough of these already. The message is highly relevant and the word choice is beautiful. The ideas are eloquent and thought provoking.



Grows:

I don't think I would use unquenched. I think quenched works better. I think i would change the first line to we divide and conquer because the other two lines are written in the active voice, present tense, so I might make it match.



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