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 | Catch Me If You Can  [E] A bit of a poem inspired by a snowflake.  |
| (4.5)  A "Game of Thrones"  Martell Review A Review from "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" Hello, SandraLynn Team Florent! ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item. Why I chose to review this work: I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when this particular poem caught my attention. The title of your poem was very intriguing as it gave the reader the impression as if it was something about run and chase and action but the short description gave a different impression. Therefore, I was very curious to know what was in the poem and here I am. First Impression: What a fun poem you have here! It was a pleasure reading your poem and at the end of the poem, the reader felt light and amused. I think it had a greater impact on me due to the fact that I love winter of all the seasons and although I haven't ever seen snow, I want to. You have such a fun idea in it; to catch a snowflake and giving an inanimate object feelings and dialogue enhanced your poem greatly. Imagery and Vocabulary: The flow of your poem was good, the rhythm was nice and both the flow and the rhythm were improved by the presence of the rhyming used in your poem. You paint a very dice picture in the poem. As I read the poem, I could imagine a child or even a teenager running around the snowflake, slipping in the snow and water but getting back up again to catch it only to have it disappear and wonder perhaps it is gone to tease another girl!  It was very refreshing and beautiful! Favourite Lines: I really liked these lines because you made the snowflake look like a small, naughty girl that loved playing. I hear her giggle, it sounds like tinkling ice. 'Til I was dizzy and fell upon my knees She kissed my cheek with a wee whisper of sound.  Final Thoughts: A beautiful poem with a perfect, intriguing title that matched with the poem. Really enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing your work with us!  Write On! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 07/19/2016 @ 10:42am EDT