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Greetings, lazymarionette!

My name is Lady Cubbyella and I am one of the sly foxes from the House of Florent. *Fox*

Title: The Mile High City Forum

First Impression: We take a road trip to Colorado almost every year! My oldest daughter and her family live near Fort Collins (a recent move from the Colorado Springs area.) We've been to a lot of great places in your state, so I was immediately interested in the forum!

What needs your attention: I'm wondering if perhaps you could add some photos to attract more attention. Also, consider opening the forum up to those who want to visit the state or do visit the state. I'm always interested in new places to go, and I always enjoy talking about the awesome places I've been in Colorado. *Bigsmile* Visitors could pick up on tips from you Coloradans, too! Heck, I could even make recommendations! *Wink* One other thing... you might want to change the yellow font to a darker shade that's easier to read. *Facepalm**Whistle* At least for us middle-aged and older members. *Wink*

What part I liked best: I love the idea of this forum and I think it could be a great place for discussion! *Smile*

Overall impression: A wonderful idea! I'd love to see you make a few small changes and perhaps put it out there on the Newsfeed to attract attention. *Smile* I think it would be fun to be involved in chatting about your beautiful state!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

Have a great day and...
*Fox*  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! *Fox*


Cubby ")


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