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Lucy plants bulbs that produce a surprise.
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Review of Magic Bulbs

Review by ~ Aqua ~

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Rated: E

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Hello, SandraLynn Team Florent!

! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when this caught my attention. I love reading magical poems and stories and the title gave off the impression to the reader that the story had a magical twist in it. The short description was even more intriguing as it made the reader think what kind of magic bulbs the author was talking about in the story and what they would do when they were turned on.

You have a very interesting and unique story here. I have read no story before that had a similar idea to this. The characters you have in this story was nice, the words you chose 'pawpaw' and 'mawmaw' were very cute and a nice invention to give the story a twist of having a magical factor in it. The idea of putting magical bulbs was good and you talked about as if they were flowers, buds and growing in the season. You create a very colourful and vivid image in the reader's mind. I would like to know why the father asked if they tinkled when she put them and then about their look? Perhaps the fairies or light was trapped in the bulbs and now it was out?